Tuesday, September 22, 2009

What I think love is, What I feel love is....

These were the few lines that i felt..n just jotted them down...its one the first poems in my life...earliest...very true...very real...although immature...yet straight from my heart...!!!
read on...

WHAT I THINK LOVE IS, WHAT I FEEL LOVE IS...

Life is so short,
People come and people go,
But something remains static,
something is permanent,
is ubiquitous,and is universal,


that something which is immortal,
that something that only the heart can understand,
that something that cannot be expressed,but just be felt,
that something which is the most vital thing,
that something which is everything in life,
that something without which life cannot exist,
and finally...
that something has a name which is 'LOVE'!


which brings a smile on every face,
which knows no bonds and no bounds,
which knows no shame and no fear,


i wonder what is this 'love',
and the heart speaks out the answer...
love is sacrifice,
love is surrender,
love is purity,
love is divine,
and finally...
LOVE IS GOD...!!!
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  1. Unknown22 September 2009 at 13:52:00 GMT+5:30

    hope u guys like it...comments and feedback are welcome... :)

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  2. TIKU22 September 2009 at 14:53:00 GMT+5:30

    ya NICE POEM NABYA,KEEP IT UP.&WOULD LOVE TO SEE MORE POEMS OF U HERE
    LOVE IS THE ART OF HEARTS&HEART OF ARTS.
    JETIKI BYAKTA,SETIKI ABYAKTA
    JETIKI ASAKTI,SETIKI ANURAKTI
    JETIKI ANURAGA,SETIKI BIRAGA
    PREMA HRUDAYA MANDIRARA SRESTHA ARADHANA&MANABIKATARA SRESTHA ARCHHANA

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  3. udit22 September 2009 at 18:57:00 GMT+5:30

    Hey navvya !!! the poem is very nice....
    There r ppl who keep pondering n wondering ki Wht's LOVE...n u did it in simple words..Gr8..
    Waiting for lots more...UDIT

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  4. Unknown2 October 2009 at 01:48:00 GMT+5:30

    thanks a ton...:), i'm humbled.

    i knw it isnt a vry gud poem, bt it has something rare..'simplicity'...cz its straight frm ma heart..

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  5. Anonymous3 October 2009 at 19:43:00 GMT+5:30

    wow!such a lovely poem,beautiful.by da way,just wntd 2 knw,is it dedicated to someone special??...trust me..if my love wld hv written it 4 me...i wd hv been on da 7th paradise...
    navyaa, u truly rock!
    i think u very deeply understand what true love is.
    cheers,
    a secret admirer.

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  6. Anonymous9 October 2009 at 08:35:00 GMT+5:30

    hmmm...toh daal mein kuch kaala hai?

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  7. Dibyanshi22 December 2009 at 00:52:00 GMT+5:30

    awesome poet

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  8. sanat rath22 December 2009 at 15:08:00 GMT+5:30

    hmmm...love and you?????kool and true...

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  9. Unknown22 December 2009 at 15:12:00 GMT+5:30

    @sanat-what makes you doubt dat its not true?

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  10. sanat rath22 December 2009 at 15:14:00 GMT+5:30

    na na !! nothing... i was simply blinded by the over-exposure to pure awesommness!!

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  11. Unknown26 March 2010 at 15:51:00 GMT+5:30

    thank you, Sanat! :)

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  12. Brajanarayan Mohapatra27 February 2011 at 20:43:00 GMT+5:30

    Highly appreciated. A really simple poem but right from the heart; thatswhy heart-touching.The essence of the poem, depicted in the last stanza is absolutely correct. However,for an ordinary man and woman,love becomes enduring only through sacrifices.The other equations are more or less philosophical and poetic, not under the domain of the common people.

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